Random *WAY* Off-topic Yaoi Rambling

[Lina Trinch]

Aye Aye, El Capitan!

[LizBeth1]

Bye bye zombie peoples.

[Lina Trinch]

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Is this a bad time to mention that I forgot the toaster streudals?

[Dr. Tinsley]

Hm. You both realize that you also left your oars and that the boat doesn't have a motor .....right?

[LizBeth1]

FFFUUUUUUCCCCH!!Now we have to go fight all of the people hiding out in the grocery store! Freakin Par. You are trying to make me like talahassee with the twinkies arent you? you know i go nuts without my morning toaster strudel.

[Dr. Tinsley]

Okay I had thought about asking this on the plot bunny screen- but considering this has a yaoi warning attached- yeah I think it would fit better here.

**WARNING**

Okay- so I'm working on a new story where poor Noahbear gets captured by van Pedo. VP is going to attempt to use Noah as a bargaining tool- with Rex. Of course Providence will not allow Rex to attempt save the life of his bf- considering Noah is 'disposable' life and also with the thought that if Rex succums to VP's commands that in order to save the life of one he will be risking the lives of millions. So rex is going to do it himself. blah blah blah .Right? So my question revolves around Van Pedo- while teasing Rex with the fact that he actually has Noah, VP starts thinking that maybe Noah can divludge a little more about Rex and Providence. So the torture commences.....*WOW long winded question.* In y'alls opinion how harsh do you think VP will be with his 'torturing' and do you think he would go pedo on noah?

[Phoenix Wings]

Eh, for my sanity's sake, I like to keep out of the "Van Pedo" conversations, but I can probably see Van Kleiss treating Noah rather poorly since he's a non-EVO...so yeah, tortured within an inch of his life if Rex does something Van Kleiss doesn't like.

[LizBeth1]

I agree with all Pnix said. exept that, yes. I firmly blieve Van Pedo would to that to poor Noah.

[Dr. Tinsley]

I just really like the fact that van kleiss has so much potential to be so sickeningly evil. He needs a really twisted and evil fanfiction.

So for the sake of the story: Should it just be regular torture?

[Phoenix Wings]

Depends on how much you want to horrify your readers and how evil you happen to be feeling.

[LizBeth1]

He has one where he DOES have a sick and twisted Pedo-esq tourture. It is graphic, but i thought it was pretty good. Poor Rex.

For the sake of the story, it will be good either way. If you want to make it nutrel(ish) allude to it but dont outright say it, them people will see it if they want to, and wont if they dont.

[Dr. Tinsley]

My alter ego feels like torturing noah. but there are so many ways.....Hm.

The reactions that I'm wanting from my readers: Disgusted, horrified completely sickened and homicidal towards Kleiss, and heart broken for Noah.

EDIT: I don't do lemons at all. I don't read them and I don't write graphic sex scenes- so I wouldn't make my readers have to skim over something I couldn't stomach to read myself. But like you said- alluding can do wonders.

[LizBeth1]

What i would suggest, if that is the reaction you want, is play up the violence, then at the end of the scene allude to things 'even more painful' to come. Then, when you go back to it, make a refrence to a certian kind of pain, or reaction. That should do it. Sy it withougt asying it.

[Dr. Tinsley]

I can do this.

[LizBeth1]

Kay! Glad to help! (if is acctually did)

I hate the school comps! you have to jam the keys down to get anything out of them, and ithat is if they even have the key, or if it is in the right sopt. i always look like an idiot when i try to type on thse things.